I wrote this on the fly when I saw some snow falling outside my window at school. I was alone, so none of the students would interrupt. Here is the result. Its a little rough, since I haven't added to it or anything.
"Snowflakes"
Forgetful flakes falling fast,
Falling forward, then forgotten.
Running right along the sky,
Right along, settlin' down.
Settle there, failing friend,
For friends fail few fellows,
And few fellows fail their friends
About Me
- Ibid
- I was born, I'm currently living, and will eventually die. After that I face my judgment, and we'll talk then.
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JMJ
ReplyDeletei like it..:D
I like the alliteration. Say it fast, and it's a tongue twister! Say it slow, and it's snowy-sounding.
ReplyDeleteMatt that's great!
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